Wednesday, February 17, 2016

A fun day with a friend


Tell about a fun day you spent with a friend.
 

Room 10 have been learning to write a short recount.  They will be successful when they remember to include a beginning, a middle and an end and write the events in the order that they happen.

Here are a few examples of their published work:


Jorja


Nya


William


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6 comments:

  1. AnonymousFebruary 17, 2016 at 5:30 PM

    You remembered to put it in order Jorja. Josh

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  2. AnonymousFebruary 17, 2016 at 5:30 PM

    Good job with your full stops. Lily-Rose

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  3. AnonymousFebruary 17, 2016 at 5:31 PM

    Hi Nya, I would like to know what else you did with Charlie. Great recount. Harry.

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  4. AnonymousFebruary 17, 2016 at 5:32 PM

    William, I like the way you have neatly published your writing. It's a great recount. Jorja

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  5. AnonymousFebruary 17, 2016 at 5:33 PM

    You remembered your full stops and your capital letters William. Jacob

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  6. SummerAugust 25, 2016 at 9:58 PM

    You guys have all done well

    Well DONE!!!!

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