The children in Room 10 read a shared book together called "LOST". They then had to plan their writing in the order of events and retell the story in their own words.
Holly: It's a good story and it made sense. Carmen and James I like the way it ended with a feeling. Lily-Rose It had a happy ending. Josh I like how she planned the story with words. Dallan and Rosa I like your pictures and words. Ben
Nya: An amazing picture plan. Josh I like how you named the pictures. You can see who the characters are. Dallan and Rosa You underlined the words. Harry You used capital letters and full stops. Holly You used finger spacing. Lily Your recount had a beginning , a middle and an end. William and Nate
What great pictures and stories by Room
ReplyDelete10. Holly said she really liked the story.
Holly:
ReplyDeleteIt's a good story and it made sense. Carmen and James
I like the way it ended with a feeling. Lily-Rose
It had a happy ending. Josh
I like how she planned the story with words. Dallan and Rosa
I like your pictures and words. Ben
Nya:
ReplyDeleteAn amazing picture plan. Josh
I like how you named the pictures. You can see who the characters are. Dallan and Rosa
You underlined the words. Harry
You used capital letters and full stops. Holly
You used finger spacing. Lily
Your recount had a beginning , a middle and an end. William and Nate
Great planning Ben, we can see you are really trying hard with your writing :)
ReplyDeleteBen
ReplyDeletemake sure you don't put capital letters in the middle of the sentence but is very good from Charlie.
Ben
ReplyDeletemake sure you don't put capital letters in the middle of the sentence but is very good from Charlie.
Ben
ReplyDeletemake sure you don't put capital letters in the middle of the sentence but is very good from Charlie.